Hello! I have yet to play the game but it looks nice! however I've seen some typos in the main page(also some recomendations) , so I hope I don't come out as rude :p

So first I would recommend you to change things like "You are a detective who has just moved to a new town. You are involved in a serial killer case" to "You are a detective who has just moved to a new town and are involved in a serial killer case" do you get what I mean?  Like don't separate every sentence and just try to stick them together

Also I've seen a small typo in th MC introduction, like "She have" instead of "She has". Besides, I would recommend changing some words since in some sentences the choose of words is a bit poor

And something that also may bugs the eye is writing on the same sentence or paragraph both "He is" and "He's", maybe stick to one because it looks a bit off

The rest seems good! The main issue would be the sentences thing but overall it looks nice, so keep going! ^^

(I wanted to write this on the discord server but the link seems to be down)

Was this game updated?😱

i can't stop smiling

oh my god?? This is amazing. I love Dane so much 😭

This game is so good! I love that it's fully voiced (their voices are so attractive lol) and god I need Dane badly >.< 

Also when I look at CGs and see MC all I can say is DAMN no wonder they are crazy about her lmao

everytime i see luke, i think of dazai osamu from bsd i need to STOP

I loved the game! the art was amazing  and I loved dane he is my fav <3 can't wait to play the full ver. the story is very promising! thank you for the game <3

So excited for the full game to come out!

This game mad me realise how much I love the mean characters *cough cough* Enox...  ANYWAY.  So bloody excite to view the full game, I made this comment at the point where the full game is required for one of the option.

the game is nice but when creators insert their own main character it leaves out allot of people aswell as ruining the immersion; i also have to mention the cartoonish proportions of the fl, is this just a style choice ?

I cant wait till the full game is released! I have enjoyed the demos very much. Look forward to seeing the story unfold

This game is amazing!

This is the best game I have seen.

I can't wait for the whole game to be out.

The visuals, the audio, the story.... divine

So i havent even come close to beating the demo (at the scene after the alleyway and i called Clark) and i can tell im going to be here for the long run😝 Love the Mcs design and always love when these style games can let you choose name (self insert for my hubbys) the love interests are all hot too so i know when i get to the finish of the demo im going to cry😭😂I will most likely do a review once I have beaten everything in the demo but as of now i love it😝 And yes I'm playing the NSFW route because im a women of culture😌😋

I love the new demo I can't wait for the full release!

Also well doing Luke's alley scene "He this said while wiping my tears away with his hand" Should be "He said this while wiping my tears away with his hand".

作者大大你的游戏真的很好,让我多了一个活下去的小目标，游戏不论是画风剧情配音还有界面设计都是非常棒的,如果没有意外我应该能打败那该死的抑郁，活到25年，玩你的游戏。我会继续坚持的！(*^▽^)/★*☆

祝你拥有开心快乐的每一天！

can't wait for the whole game to come out! so ready to support this project when it does!

lmao I finished playing the demo only to return to the page and find out that a new demo had just dropped- ig I'm diving back into this game for some more content hehe

I really like the demo can't wait for the full game.

🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤